Monday, July 1, 2013

2nd half of Jonte's writing

Posted by Tui Class at 3:09 PM
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  1. AnonymousJuly 3, 2013 at 12:37 AM

    Great use of imagination for creating the story. I liked your use of vocabulary and how you desribe the action. I really enjoyed the ending too.

    Mrs Stevenson

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